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PostSubject: Re: Deleted   Thu Nov 20, 2008 10:28 am

Wow....i'm actually speechless...it was such a wonderful chapter, I loved it. MORE MORE MORE!!! you've let me have a nibble now I want the whole damn feast!
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Wow....this is a great first chapter! I look forward to reading more!
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PostSubject: Re: Deleted   Sat Nov 22, 2008 7:08 am

Very good first chapter! I would like o know what happens now. Please, please, please continue again soon?
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PostSubject: Re: Deleted   Sat Nov 22, 2008 9:17 am

Keyklee,

This is one of the best Phantom phanfics I have ever read, and believe me, I've read quite a few! This story has an incredible emotional core, and you pull off first person descriptions brilliantly.

One little thing I noticed: "And in case it of night, where should I go?" Something is confuddled in that part, or I'm just not reading it right. Very Happy

This sentence is superb:"Then I gathered them in my arms and cuddled them to my chest for several moments." That really grabbed me, the wording and everything is excellent!

Amazing beginning! I look forward to reading more from you. Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Deleted   Sat Dec 13, 2008 10:05 am

Since chapters two and three are merged, justify the reason for the other woman and what you can't finish, give to me and I will fix. Just let me know what you have in mind.

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PostSubject: Re: Deleted   Mon Dec 15, 2008 7:13 pm

Keyklee....you are being very hard on yourselves. This is a wonderful forum with absolutely wonderful members. I know what it's like to be less than satisfied with a piece of writing, and it can be very frustrating. I know you will get it to where you want it to be, and we will all be waiting to read it. Fay is one of the most wonderful people I've ever known and an incredible writer. She really will give you whatever help you need. I look forward to your next chapters, whenever you are ready to give them Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Deleted   Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:53 pm

very nice, ma ami. but where is the rest?
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