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PostSubject: phan script   Tue Nov 04, 2008 5:16 pm

My Friend and I were discussing Phantom a few weeks ago, and she forgot when it took place and asked me. I was talking to someone else and said 2006 or something. Anyway, it implied Erik would still be alive. She thought this was really funny and thought Erik would be kicked out of France by now and we could visit him in a nursing home Rolling Eyes (it wasn't my idea). So a few days later, she shoves this in my face. These are just for fun, so no one get offended by anything, please! Well, it's poorly written, but it's somewhat funny.


Nurse: Are you sure you want him for your social services project?
Annie: Yes, we're sure.
Nurse:...Aren't you a little old to be in high school?
Alexis: uh...we're seniors!
Annie: Y-Yeah!
Nurse: Alright, then. This way.
(both follow nurse)
Nurse: (knocks on door) You have visitors!
Erik: Liar! Nobody ever visits Erik!
Annie: No, she's serious!
Nurse: (opens door) have fuuun.
(annie & alexis enter with hand at level of thier eyes)
Annie: Hiii.
Erik: What?
Alexis: Uhm, yeah. We want you as a social services project.
Erik: And?
Annie: (pulls out paper) well, we have to take you out of the building twice, read you at least one book, and visit you an hour a week.
Alexis: (whispers) where did you get that?
Annie: Kaela. Anyway, we're doing the book part today, but we don't want to read so here.
Erik (reads) "The Opera Ghost really existed..." Wait, there's a book?
Alexis: Why do you think we wanted you for our project?


Okay BlackMaskWhiteMask, your turn.

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PostSubject: Re: phan script   Wed Nov 05, 2008 10:29 am

This is funny. If you are going to continue in a play form, give us a little description of the people, especially Erik.

I can't see him in a nursing home. Therefore, show us why he's there. Since he's always been so independent, for what reason would he consent to this.

Otherwise, good job! Make it longer next time.

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PostSubject: Re: phan script   Wed Nov 05, 2008 11:05 am

sorry i didn't have time to finish it

Alexis:Its Friday Night! That means
Annie: Movie Night!
Erik:Who plays me this time?
Alexis:Robert Edglund.
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PostSubject: Re: phan script   Wed Nov 05, 2008 12:34 pm

BlackMaskWhiteMask the post is too short. All compositions must be at least 500 words. I didn't mention it to snowmoccasin, but hers is only 167 words. This is good humor, take some time and make it longer. There is no hurry.

Take some time to finish it and add a little description and detail, please, please, please. For all our sakes. Surprised

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PostSubject: Re: phan script   Thu Nov 06, 2008 6:38 am

I said I didn't have time to finish it yesterday. The schools computer tried to log me out.


so here is the complete version


Alexis:Its Friday Night! That means
Annie: Movie Night!
Erik:Who plays me this time?
Alexis:Robert Edglund.
(at the "No tonight your name is Christine"part)
Erik: It never happened that way!
Alexis:Sure...
Erik:I'm serious it didn't!
(starts to cry)
Annie:(rubs shoulder sympatheticly) Oh. You poor unhappy Erik...
Erik:(snaps) I DON'T WANT YOUR SYMPATHY!
(all turn back in time to see a womans head get pulled out of a punch bowl)
Alexis:Ew. Thats just distasteful.
Annie: I just remembered how much I hated this movie.
Erik: you said this was based off of my story?! I never did any of this!
Alexis: I think they took a copy of the book and threw it in a ceiling fan and just pasted random words to make the script.
Annie: Yeah then they lost it half way through production and just said okay just do something on the set.
Alexis: That makes sense...
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PostSubject: Re: phan script   Thu Nov 06, 2008 11:56 am

This is cute, but it's still not long enough. You only have 147 words.

Please take some time to make a at least 500 words. It would make it a lot better.

Thank you. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: phan script   Fri Nov 07, 2008 11:47 am

Actually, it's suppost to be longer, but I think she lost the origional... I wasn't aware there was a 500 word limit. Thank you Fay.

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PostSubject: Re: phan script   Fri Nov 07, 2008 11:49 am

PhantomnessFay wrote:
This is funny. If you are going to continue in a play form, give us a little description of the people, especially Erik.

I can't see him in a nursing home. Therefore, show us why he's there. Since he's always been so independent, for what reason would he consent to this.

Otherwise, good job! Make it longer next time.

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I don't know why he's in a nursing home because I'm not the one that came up with it. We were just doing this together to be funny and she said we should put it up here.

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PostSubject: Re: phan script   Fri Nov 07, 2008 12:51 pm

I think it's hilarious, it's just that it should be longer and have a bit more physical description.

Please don't stop. Give us more. We want more!!! Score!
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PostSubject: Re: phan script   Sun Nov 09, 2008 3:03 pm

uhm...well, I'll have to put a few together, but here's one:


The Next Week.


Annie (barges into room) It's Friday night!!!
Alexis: (pushes past Annie) MOVIE NIGHT!
Erik: Again?!
Annie: Yup. Every Friday night will be movie night until we're done with the silent version.
Erik:(sarcastically) Great. Who is it tonight.
Alexis: Gerard Butler and Emmy Rossum.
Annie: I hate both of them.
Alexis: The only bad part is his hair changes color after "Christine" takes off his mask. (puts dvd in) now shut up so we can watch it.
2 minutes after the movie starts...

Erik: This is already inaccurate!!!
Alexis: (sighs) Well, Hollywood can't get everything right!
Annie: These French subtitles are getting on my nerves.



Sorry, I don't have enough time to write more, but I'm not finished yet! Please bare with me!!!

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